Kia ora Laylah I enjoyed reading your diary (not dairy) story a lot. It made me imagine you with your family out on the farm. You have used great detail, fragile is a word that made me think you had to be careful or you might have hurt yourself as you climbed over the wooden fence. Keep up the good diary (not dairy) writing :)
This story brought back great memories for me, hanging out with you guys at the farm! The descriptions made it feel so real. And I hope the farm really is green :)
Kia ora Laylah
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed reading your diary (not dairy) story a lot. It made me imagine you with your family out on the farm. You have used great detail, fragile is a word that made me think you had to be careful or you might have hurt yourself as you climbed over the wooden fence. Keep up the good diary (not dairy) writing :)
This story brought back great memories for me, hanging out with you guys at the farm! The descriptions made it feel so real. And I hope the farm really is green :)
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