I am a Year 5 student in Team Moana at Ohaeawai School in Northland, New Zealand. My teachers are Mrs Brajkovich, Miss Fletcher and Miss Stewart.
Today we wrote a piece of writing about the weather. We got to choose what ever type we wanted. I choose to write about Thunder & Lightning.
Kia ora LaylahI like the interesting language you have chosen for your poem, and how you have begun a sentence with an adverb. Your collage trees look great, like they are being pushed over by the thunder.
Kia ora Laylah
ReplyDeleteI like the interesting language you have chosen for your poem, and how you have begun a sentence with an adverb. Your collage trees look great, like they are being pushed over by the thunder.